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| zoya123 |
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Joined: 30th Oct, 2010
Topic: 7
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Age: 22
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| Posted on:26th Nov 2010, 5:57pm |
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 Sad Poetry:Aakhir Tum Mar Q nahi Jate
e Jaan Kar Khushi Hui k Usay Bhi Mere Dukh Ka Ehsas Hai " faraz "
Aaj Us Nay Keh Jo Dia k" Aakhir Tum Mar Q nahi Jate…
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| Raja Taqi |
Group: Members
Joined: 17th Sep, 2010
Topic: 26
Post: 1742
Age: 45
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| Posted on:30th Nov 2010, 10:16pm |
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 Saim
wo mar ker bi zinda ho giya to kidher jayein gaygham tery jeeny ka nahi ghum apny mar jany ka he
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| saim1 |
Group: Members
Joined: 23rd May, 2008
Topic: 37
Post: 2034
Age: 33
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| Posted on:1st Dec 2010, 2:57pm |
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heeee heeeee ......edit.......
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| Raja Taqi |
Group: Members
Joined: 17th Sep, 2010
Topic: 26
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Age: 45
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| Posted on:1st Dec 2010, 9:23pm |
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Saim ......edit.......
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| noor8858 |
Group: Members
Joined: 21st Dec, 2010
Topic: 1
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Age: 21
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| Posted on:22nd Dec 2010, 2:16pm |
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 adab erz hai
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| saim1 |
Group: Members
Joined: 23rd May, 2008
Topic: 37
Post: 2034
Age: 33
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| Posted on:22nd Dec 2010, 3:45pm |
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wah wah wah wah kiya bat hey .....edit......
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| s4u |
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Joined: 18th Aug, 2010
Topic: 90
Post: 4917
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| Posted on:23rd Dec 2010, 10:13am |
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stop commenting on other people,if you see anything wrong give moderator note
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| Raja Taqi |
Group: Members
Joined: 17th Sep, 2010
Topic: 26
Post: 1742
Age: 45
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| Posted on:23rd Dec 2010, 12:18pm |
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teri qasam hum ko teri yadein jab ati hein humein her pal satati hein dhunwan utha he dill se ye kessy wo hi nafertein wo hi adtein |
| M Amin |
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| Posted on:24th Dec 2010, 7:36am |
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bahany sy bohat uddas hy koi tery chupp ho jany sy'' ho saky to bat kar kisi bahany say'' tu lakh khafa sahi mager itna tu daikh'' koi toot gaya hy tery rooth jany sy |
| Raja Taqi |
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Joined: 17th Sep, 2010
Topic: 26
Post: 1742
Age: 45
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| Posted on:24th Dec 2010, 11:09pm |
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Saim tery hath se likhi tehreer aissy mitt gayi,jessy mitt jaye meri taqdeer gila kerein hum 2no kiss se, wo to ek nagan thi jissy bhool ker apna samnjh baithy |
| M Amin |
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| Posted on:24th Dec 2010, 1:08pm |
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tanha Tanha mily koi tu karain Dil ki bat bhi Saya sa laga huwa hy har Aadmi k sath |
| M Amin |
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| Posted on:24th Dec 2010, 1:12pm |
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some one friends kiya ap is poetry ko mukammal kar dain gay I think Allama Iqbal ki hy ''waqat-e-salam phir gaya kaaby (Khana Kaaba) sy munh (mouth) tera |
| saim1 |
Group: Members
Joined: 23rd May, 2008
Topic: 37
Post: 2034
Age: 33
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| Posted on:25th Dec 2010, 11:58pm |
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wah wah kiya bat hey meri post ko delete hi kar diya gaya,akhir jalan or hasad kahi na kahi zahir ho hi jati hey,aik member ney yahan par appney comments diya tha uss key jawab may kuch likha tha may ney,meri wo post hi delete kar di gai hey,admin sey meri request hey please meri uss post ko restor kar daien |
| saim1 |
Group: Members
Joined: 23rd May, 2008
Topic: 37
Post: 2034
Age: 33
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| Posted on:25th Dec 2010, 11:59pm |
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raja bhai app ney nagin wala sher bhout khoob likha hey,bilkul sahi discribe kiya hey app ney |
| s4u |
Group: Members
Joined: 18th Aug, 2010
Topic: 90
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| Posted on:26th Dec 2010, 10:48am |
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To Moderator
agar error ki waja se kisi ki post pr note dia ja sakta to phir zarorat hi na thi mojhe apne comments dene ki .......................warna mere khayal se announced mod & admin ko khosh hona chahiye k dosre members kisi ka mazzaq uraein,on ki likhi baton pr hansein....kiu k ye rules hain na yahan k???................ab agar yahan kuch bura ho raha h aur error bhi hai to is error ki waja se mod note dena bhi mushkil hai to os waqt jo theik lga wo kr dia......................khair jitni bhi post edit hoi h aur kuch delete bhi wo restore kr dein.yahan kuch qabil members ne golden word likhe th onhe edit/delete krne ki buhot bari ghalati ho gai kisi se.......poetry me jootey marey ja rahe hain....ye hai shairy aur esi hi post ki zarorat bhi hai jis se forum ko nam mile ga................acha kia mere diye gae comments ko edit kr dia.agar main bhi yahan topic starter ka mazaq urra rahi hoti tab to mojh pr bhi fakhar hota.......ab mojhe omeed hai k meri post edit hone k bad jo pehle ho raha tha ab os se ziyada ho ga...........khair agar esa na hota to topic starter ko forum pr active hi dekha jata.....lekin os bechare ka mazaq hi bna dia hai.to ab wo bhi forum pr dobara n aya.....ye meri ghalati thi k maine oot ptang se comments ko rokne ki koshish ki.agar esa hi chalta raha to new members pr is ka bura asar prta hai.
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| s4u |
Group: Members
Joined: 18th Aug, 2010
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| Posted on:26th Dec 2010, 10:50am |
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to members jitna ho sake kisi ka mazaq urraein.aur ye bhi koshish honi chahiye k aap ki hr post me jotey ,galiyan,pathar sab hon.....enjoy
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| M Amin |
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| Posted on:27th Dec 2010, 4:52am |
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arzz hy Dhakky na de Zalim teri Mahfil sy chaly jaty hain'''' Zara Tooty huwy Dil k tukrry to uthany de ''''''''''''''''''' Have a GooD Day |
| Bhimji |
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Topic: 14
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Age: 28
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| Posted on:27th Dec 2010, 10:38am |
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 Wese
Yeh poetry thread hae mgr iss thread ki poetry hae kahan???? |
| M Amin |
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| Posted on:27th Dec 2010, 4:12pm |
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 Bhimji....
samajh samajh kar jo na samjhy'''''' Meri nazar main wo Nasamajh hy. |
| jazzii |
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Joined: 02nd Nov, 2009
Topic: 7
Post: 63
Age: 25
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| Posted on:28th Dec 2010, 11:38pm |
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gum ,,,,,dhond kar hi rehta hai
main kahein b chhup jaoon
door kar pakrta hai
kitni hi masfat ho
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is ankh mcholi mein
gum tumara JAN -E JAAN
harta ni muj se
ab b jeet jata hai
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