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| Red Chilli |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 7:52pm |
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 Amin4u
bohat khooob.......
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| Seemi |
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Topic: 14
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Age: 25
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 7:57pm |
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 Saathi ho
Diyaar-e-Noor Mein Meri Shaboun Ka Saathi Ho
Koi To Ho Jo
Meri Wehshatoun Ka Saathi Ho
Main Oos Se Jhoot Bhee Bouloo'n To Mujh Se Sach
Bolay
Meray Mizaaj K Saray Mousmou'n Ka Saathi Ho
Main Oos K Haath Na
Aaoon Woh Mera Ho K Rahay
Main Gir Paroon To Meri Pastiyoun Ka Saathi
Ho
Woh Meray Naam kii nisbat Se Motabar Thehray
Gali Gali Mein Meri
Ruswayoun Ka Saathi Ho
Karay Kalaam Mujh Se To Meray Lehjay Mein
Main Chup
Rahoon To Meray Tewroun Ka Sathi Ho
Woh Khawb Dekhy To Dekhay Meray Hawaalay
Se
Meray Kheyal K Sab Manzroun Ka Saathi Ho
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| Amin4u |
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Joined: 15th Feb, 2008
Topic: 1
Post: 194
Age: 28
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:03pm |
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Red Chilli Thanks.. |
| Amin4u |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:05pm |
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 Red chilli
By the way,
Thanks to Sunehri 76 jee, ke uno ne yeh Post start ki.!!
kyunki wo Kamaal ker deti hain poetry mein..
unko peronally Thanks kehna paray ga, magar wo online nai hain filhaal.
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| Amin4u |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:06pm |
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Red Chilli By the way,
Thanks to Sunehri 76 jee, ke uno ne yeh Post start ki.!!
kyunki wo Kamaal ker deti hain poetry mein..
unko personally* Thanks kehna paray ga, magar wo online nai hain filhaal.
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| Red Chilli |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:08pm |
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Seemi aunty waaha waah waah bohat khooob...........
Amin4u: you are always welcome
aap kafee din baad forum per nazar aa rehe hain..kia aap ke ghar light chali gayi thi jo aap itne din forum per nahi aaye..lol
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| Amin4u |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:09pm |
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 Seemi
Bohat Khoob & Bohat Achi Poetry.
Very Nice.
Aur
Bohat Udaas ker diya hai aapki poetry ne...!!!
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| Seemi |
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Topic: 14
Post: 3829
Age: 25
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:12pm |
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thank u jee Thank u jee thank u...
red chili baji pasand karnay ka shukria..
Amin4u.. aap ka bhi bohat shukria.
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| Red Chilli |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:19pm |
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Amin4u aap rona band karein aur rote rote ja ker so jayen...lol
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| Amin4u |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:19pm |
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 Red Chilli
Thanks for the compliment.!!
humain to yeh "Sharaf" hasil huay kafi arsa ho geya hai k hum bhi zara andheray main rahain..!! (yani Load Shedding ..!! lol )
Last time London ke kuch areas main light band hui thi aaj se koi 2,3 saal pehlay.!!
Wo bhi bohat taiz aandhi wagera aaee thi aur sirf 2 hours ke leeay band hui thi.
uske baad ab tak nai hui. ALLAH ka shukar hai.!!
ic ka maza lene ke leeay to shaed Pakistan aana paray ga, ab to takreeban 4 years ho chukay hain.!!
I really feel sorry for the people in Pakistan.!! pata nai hamari Govt kab tak yeh problem solve nai karay gi..?
ab aapke sawal ka jawab:
main bas silent reader hoon kabhi kabhar dil chahay to reply ker deta hoon.
wese kuch dino se Busy tha, ic leeay forum pe nai aya.
Magar Sunehri76 se aksar baat yani chat ho jati hai.
Any way, it was nice replying to you, Red Chilli.
and Sorry guys I am writing personal replies on this topic.
Expecting some more nice poetry from other members.
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| Red Chilli |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:20pm |
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Seemi is mein shukriya kehne wali koi baat nahi.........aap ne itni achi poetry likhi hai main ne khali khuli tareef ker di hai
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| Seemi |
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Joined: 11th Sep, 2007
Topic: 14
Post: 3829
Age: 25
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:22pm |
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sahih hai aap khul kar tareef kiya karein.. mein or poetry bhi post karti hoon abhi...
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| Amin4u |
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Age: 28
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:22pm |
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Red Chilli Lagta hai aapke pass Tareef ka khula Stock hai.!! Lol.
Bass aisay hee tareefain karti rahain, phir hee aur members achi achi poetry likhain ge..!! |
| Amin4u |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:24pm |
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Seemi & Red Chilli Lagta hai Poetry Khatam ho gaee hai aur baatain shuroo ho gaee hain ic Topic pe, Sunehri76 subah dekhe gi to bohat Gussa hogi.!! Lol |
| Seemi |
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Age: 25
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:25pm |
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yaad tumhari aati hai Jab log Nazar Na Atey Hon Tab Yaad Tumhari Ati He
Jab Manzar
Sab Kho Jatey Ho Tab Yaad Tumhari Ati He
Jab Door Ufaq Par Laali Ho, Jab
Sham Udaasi Wali Ho
Jab Zabt Ka Daman Toota Ho, Jab Aaas ka daman CHoota
Ho
Jab Apney dard Satatey ho,Jab Dheron Gham Rulatey Hoo
Tab Yaad
Tumhari Ati He, Tab Yaad Tumhari Ati He
Jab Chanda Jhalak Dikhlata Ho Jab
Suuraj Dhoop Nahata Hoo
Jab Sawan Ghir Ghir Ata Ho, Jab Panchi Shor Machatey
Ho
Jab Khushiyan Raqqss me Gati Ho,Or Apne Saaz Bajatii Ho
Tab Yaad
Tumhari Ati He, Tab Yaad Tumhari Ati He
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| Amin4u |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:26pm |
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Seemi Wah Wah,
Bohat Khoob..!!
Bohat Khoob..!!
Bohat hee Khoob..!! |
| Amin4u |
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:31pm |
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Khushiyon ki Duhaaee Aaj Khushiyon ki Koee Duhaaee dega,
Nilaa hai Chaand to Dikhaaee dega.
Ae Mohabbat Karne walo, zara dekh ke Mohabbat karna,
Ek Aansoo bhi Girra to Sunaaee dega. |
| Seemi |
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Topic: 14
Post: 3829
Age: 25
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:34pm |
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waah jee waah Kya baat hai..
Red chilli aap ki poetry kahan hai.. aap bhi likho.
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| Seemi |
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Joined: 11th Sep, 2007
Topic: 14
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Age: 25
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:34pm |
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Ek Khat ITNA hee yaad rakh MUJHEY,
Jaisey kisi
kitaab me,
Beetey dino k DOST ka,
EK KHAT para huwa miley,
Lafz mitey
mitey se hon,
Rang urra urra sa ho,
Lakin woh AJNABI na ho!
Uth ker
terey galey lagey,
Beetey dino ki sab KHTAAYEN,
Bhooley huwey tamam
sukh,
Guzrey huwey tamam dukh,
TUJH se kahey aur ro parey!!!!!!
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| Sar Pheri |
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Joined: 23rd May, 2008
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Age: 2010
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| Posted on:24th May 2008, 8:35pm |
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waaah waaah waaah Amin4u & Seemi very nice
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