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~~HITMAN~~
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Group: Members Joined: 09th May, 2011 Topic: 122 Post: 4287 Age:
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| Posted on:30th Jan 2008, 6:36am |
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 Urdu Poetry: Mujhe Dar Lagta Hai
Mujhe Dar Lagta hai
un logon kay bichar janay kay khayaal say
jo meray dil kay buhut kareeb hain
kay pata nahi kab kon saath choor jaye
main un ko khona nahi chahta
likin main kya karoon
unko khonay say bachana meray bas main nahi
bas main hai tou sirf unko khotay hoye dekhna
is liyain main kuch nahi karsakta
siwaye is baat ko sochnay kay.......
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..............ye ek choti si meaningless nazam thi meri (mujhe bahi pata ye nazam hai ya kuch aur bas likh dala)...............poet members agar is ko mazeed continue karsaktay hain tou plzzzzz kijiyai
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nelish
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Group: Members Joined: 13th Jan, 2008 Topic: 25 Post: 1152 Age:
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| Posted on:30th Jan 2008, 10:32pm |
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 good poetry
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zeb
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Group: Members Joined: 18th Aug, 2007 Topic: 114 Post: 13610 Age:
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| Posted on:31st Jan 2008, 3:17am |
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gud poetry very nice poetry :-) |
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~~HITMAN~~
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Group: Members Joined: 09th May, 2011 Topic: 122 Post: 4287 Age:
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| Posted on:2nd Feb 2008, 2:50am |
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aur haan mujhe dar lagta hai kyunkay yahan koi topic par jawaab nahi deta
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nadeem AOL
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Group: Members Joined: 26th Nov, 2007 Topic: 8 Post: 265 Age:
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| Posted on:2nd Feb 2008, 3:29am |
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 Continued poetry ......
Mujhay dar lagta hay
k kahein mera daman-e-zabt bheeg na jay,
Yeh jism-o-jan baghawat per uter na aay,
Har lamha yeh bikharti , simat ti howi rooh,
Kaheen koi ik or dastan likh na jaay.
Mujhay dar lagta hay.
how is it people ??? kaisi lagi continue poetry ??? plz comment.
Cheers.
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~~HITMAN~~
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Group: Members Joined: 09th May, 2011 Topic: 122 Post: 4287 Age:
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| Posted on:2nd Feb 2008, 3:33am |
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 buhut hi barhiya nikkay
yaar paji tussi tou ek dum jhakaas poet niklay ............... buhut hi barhiya
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nadeem AOL
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Group: Members Joined: 26th Nov, 2007 Topic: 8 Post: 265 Age:
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| Posted on:2nd Feb 2008, 3:40am |
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!! Thanks you yar....
Cheers. |
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zeb
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Group: Members Joined: 18th Aug, 2007 Topic: 114 Post: 13610 Age:
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| Posted on:2nd Feb 2008, 3:40am |
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yessssssss very niceeeeeeeee |
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BeautyStar
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Group: Members Joined: 16th May, 2007 Topic: 52 Post: 3598 Age:
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| Posted on:2nd Feb 2008, 7:29am |
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Re: Mujhe Dar Lagta hai
HitMan kamal hai yaar ajj pehley baar suna Bhooton ko bhi darr lagta hai (lol) ... Hungama paajee yah kiya maajrah hai sara ?
Nadeem AOL Bahi app tou Shaer-e-Magrib nikley ;)
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nadeem AOL
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Group: Members Joined: 26th Nov, 2007 Topic: 8 Post: 265 Age:
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| Posted on:2nd Feb 2008, 12:50pm |
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Continued poetry !! Mujhay dar lagta hay,
k kahein yeh aansu palkon say tapak na jaain,
Teri dard bhari muskurahat sun ker,
Ye dharkan-e-dil kahein ruk na jaay,
Mujhay dar lagta hay,
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